Review Detail of SkyNeves in Hollywood King

Well came here because of the author Extra26's recommendation/mention. I'll comment on the book before giving my personal opinion of the work in general. 1-Writing Quality: The writing quality is pretty good, it has little to no grammar mistakes so far. So far I can't think of a major downside about the writing and that actually says something. [4 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: the plot is good it looks like the author planned how it will progress. The downside is that some parts where skipped or felt rushed. An example was when MC(Ian) tried to convince his uncle about letting him do something.(Not giving much details due to spoilers) [4 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: Well this is one of the points that are not so great for me, sometimes the characters seem forced(their interactions) and sometimes the characters don't seem to have the same dept to them. The best example is the MC who at first is cold since he's focused on assimilating his new life but after that his personality takes many turns.(again not explaining in dept due to spoilers) [3 Stars Here] 4-Update Stability: I can't complain about this since I started to read it when it had 8 chapters and it seemed daily. [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: The world is detailed but not detailed enough. I mean like scenes, we get he's staring in to a mirror, there's a blue something something bed and all that but it's one of the few scenes that is well described. Others like the guild he shows up to register isn't that detailed. [4 Stars Here] Overall: 4.0 Opinion: When I read "inspired by My Hollywood System" I thought maybe it's just because it's a Hollywood book and with a system, maybe take some ideas like company management and stuff like that, but the start is basically the same with a different backstory. 1-MC ends up in new world with same name as him(Ok, at least the bodies are different right?); 2-The MC is an orphan(same in both books); 3-MC gets system(at least the systems are different but this one is less challenging which was a nice touch); 4-The uncle is a friend of the dead dad(This one is better off... kinda) Basically the start is very similar, thankfully the backgrounds are different so it gives a different feel most times. There's a lack of consistently on the MC's character/personality. The other characters seem more superficial or not given enough background or something like that. This honestly feels like a fanfiction of My Hollywood System, no offense. For new readers: I recommend reading at least 5 chapters before making an opinion based on my kinda biased review😂. Honestly it's a nice read, it just has some things that I can see/picture for another story(which kinda makes sense since it was inspired by it).