Review Detail of Offtask in An Owl's Rise

Right first things first: so far there are only 8 chapters out not counting the prologue, but from what I have seen so far, I am pretty impressed. The main character has plenty, and I mean PLENTY of room for character development and growth. The world seems intruiging, and from what (very little) I have seen of the magic system it seems… at least to have some thought put into it. There is no system, which is nice, but it also means the magic system is much harder to pull off. The plot so far seems interesting, but it could dramatically crash and burn as working in the mechanics of a softer power system, like there seems to be, can leave all kinds of plot holes. I am really excited for this book and hope it will be at least as good as the author’s other one, which I have been enjoying so far. Oh and Mr Author; if you do put 18+ content in there please make sure it is in a self contained chapter that doesnt affect the story? Thanks