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Successx4164
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Nah this story is…. Why would you put the god ruins YOU brought up in chapter 4 or 5 and then do basically a timeskip to 30 sum chapters before talking about it like what kind of novels is this? If you were gonna make the Mc cold and ruthless then why make him have affection, stick to one story line or plot so this shit won’t be confusing.

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vinayraj
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I already informed MC will be affectionate to his family in my review.