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I hope you don't Make him average looking and act normal and as a side character to avoid problems and don't change the story as him even knowing the world is a story changes everything I have seen in these type of story the mc just wants to live as a side character and is average looking and the novels have no romance instead you should make it like trash of the counts faimly make him collect the overpowered items and become op and have romance and hope you add atleast 2-3 wommen and try making it heram if not that just s*x friends I know a lot of people don't like heram because the girls fall in love with the mc very fast but that is stupid as it's a story and author are lazy and know people reading these type of novel are looking for instant gratification so do something like make him the most handsome man and give him passive chrisma skill so it will make more sense and things skills that make the a more emotional and frank about their felling I know a lot fo people hate it but its not that bad and also hope you add some r18 scene I know a lot of stories in which the authors just skipped it it dosent feel good to read ot the mc never f××kx the female mc hope you do this I haven't read it now but I hope you read this comment and take my advice and you can take some liberties in the common sense as it's a story and you just need to tell the reasons why that happened if you try to follow reality the book won't become popular as a lot of people read these boook of escape from reality this doesn't imply you don't explain and give atleast a vague reasoning to situations that dosent conform to our reality and most people who hate herams hate it because they are probably single and Are bummed about the mc getting all the girls easily and just blame it not being stupid because it's not how girls normally behave while completely ignoring that they are reading a fictional work made by some author who is super bussy and cant drag the romance arc to long and go in detail also they ignore all the mystical parts of the story like Cultivation,superpower,system and many more and they take their frustration by saying things like the girls are falling for mc forr no reason no shi*t sherlock he is the mc the main f*ckin protoganist the world is made for him and his story not a native English speaker

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