Review Detail of Sloth_Incarnate in The Greatest Dynasty Ever

Its not very good to be honest. There are a lot of decisions made that don’t really make sense. Most of the character are uninteresting and have no depth, only being added because there can’t just be the MC around. Author seemingly can’t introduce a female character without mentioning in someway how attractive they are regardles of age. Its really weird. ( this might not be a knock to some of you, but it is to me) Author doesn’t really seem to understand American culture (not sure if they’re from here, if they are then thats even worse) but they have a basic graps which is ok I guess. Though they definitly don’t know how US high school works. The writing in clunky and a lot of the dialogue is way to formal. People are always talking as if they are in a business meeting. The grammar isn’t the best either, but not terrible. Really the only redeaming factor, for me, in this story is that the Author skipped his childhood and started when he was 14. But that also has come with its own problems. As its made all the charcters, even MC, hollow with no depth.