Review Detail of TOS in The Greatest Dynasty Ever

I like the book, but to be honest, I read until chapter 20 and it looks more like a documentation of mc’s life than a story about basketball. I mean, the interactions are greatly done but they are too few. I would rather you take your time, write a lot of fillers about his life to make us empathize more with the mc. At this point, I would not feel touched if something bad happened to him since except his basketball skills and basic information about his family, I don’t know nothing about him. It’s just a suggestion! I really like the concept of the novel though. Good luck with it!!!