Writing Quality: Typos and basic word mistakes. Updates: Regular Updates Story Development: Aside from a skip of years at times the story is progressing smoothly without any jarring parts. Character Design: The MC personality seems overly concerned with the state of the world despite what appears to be her personality. World Background: Solid world building and magic design. The overall writing style is simple and easy to understand. Typical Demon Lord plot with a twist. The storytelling is easy going and doesn't get you attached to the MC early on but it seems to work. Sometimes the chapters have several paragraphs from previous chapter I guess to make their word count which lost a lot of points with me personally. Will be looking forward to seeing how this story progresses. Good work author san.
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