Review Detail of Joseon_Walking in A BILLIONAIRE'S TRUST GAME

Let me first preface this that I always give honest reviews even if people are looking for review swaps. WQ: This is where the story takes the biggest hit. Some of the grammar is a bit shaky. Nothing that will cause you to make it unreadable, but enough errors and minor issues that can take you out of the story. The Author seems dedicated to the story and has seemed to improve so this could get better with time. My biggest suggestion is pause. Updates for a day or two and just go back over your past chapters and fix the basic stuff. It reads more like a script for a tvshow which is interesting. I do hope for more description of the things around the characters a bit more. Otherwise. Good start. SOU: 5/5 nothing more to say SD: A little early, but solid. CD: Too early to have a strong impression of the characters, but solid start. WB: It is based more in reality so not much to say here.