Review Detail of Rhongomynaid in The First Vampire

A decent read. Acceptable world building, generic but not bland protagonist, side characters with the ability to think a bit, seemingly well thought out power systems and an interesting premise. This could go sideways later on but it's looking fairly promising right now. Despite being a bit basic, this is probably as good as it's going to get on this site. I like the potential, concept, story and worldbuilding because I think they could be rather interesting so this gets a high score. It's always nice when my depressingly low expectations are actually exceeded for once. 3.25/5.