Review Detail of Zenos_Maxima2611 in In Marvel as Ultimate Skill Raphael

Item: In Marvel as Ultimate Skill Raphael
Rating: 2.8

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Zenos_Maxima2611Lv11yrZenos_Maxima2611

cringe with your MC bro, a literal edgelord with OP powers. the system sheet takes up almost half the chapter, it needs to be summarized again. the reader will be bored if half the chapter only contains the status of the mc and the system.

In Marvel as Ultimate Skill Raphael

Akros_Zero

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Akros_ZeroAuthorAkros_Zero

I wrote those chapters when I was just starting my writing carrier, I have improved a lot in later chapters and changed many things.

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