Review Detail of Ferro in The Phoenix - A GOT Fan-Fiction

It started somewhat good, with good plot and hopes for character development but then it goes to the classic harem WN that you can expect on this site. Writing Quality - 3= Good, it could improve with time. Stability of Updates - 5= Nice updates in my opinion, taking into consideration the length of the chapters. Story Development - 3= Not that great after the harem starts kicking in, as I said, I think this is not good. Character Design - 2= Somewhat 2 dimensional character that confuses me, cannot relate with the MC and the characterization is somewhat basic, coupled with the harem behavior makes this MC subpar in my honest opinion. World Background - 2= The expansion made into an already made world is not that great to guarantee more than 2 stars. Harem novel will always fail to gather the attention of more attentive readers. In all honesty my review serves no purpose if you are writing just for you, or because it is fun. But if you want to write something good and competitive in the market and grow as a writer, then the common harem route is not the way... At least I think so. Have a good day.