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Shinxbi
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About 200 chaps in and one thing I simply don't understand How tf can a 4 y/o wear weights heavier than Lee's and RUN + keep wearing them all the time. For many it might be a small thing but for me it's a big deal. Hokage agrees that after devouring the Uchiha Jonin, his chakra is chunin level and he is stronger than Sasuke at present (7-8 y/o Sasuke) but he isn't even as strong as an academy graduate Other than that and a few plot holes, the story is decent. I don't complain much while reading fanfics if it ain't too wierd or I'm not too tilted at that moment Grammar/Spelling mistakes: Very Few MC's genin squad: A well-thought team with a purpose (search and destroy squad) with Guy as the sensei which I've rarely read so a good thing for me Pacing: A little slow but workable Love interests: Good ones Overall: Keep Going and I'll keep reading, it's definitely worth reading just ignore a few things at the beginning

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Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon

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lazarus898
lazarus898Authorlazarus898

Thank you for the review...I will try to work on the things that you have pointed out here

Game_Killer
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Tbf Naruto character are at times ridic ulous look at 4yr old Kakashi in canon. Curious, who are the Love interests?

vieweye
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Just asking at chapter 200 he is 4 years old???? Man i was hoping 200 chapters in hed be like 18+

lazarus898
lazarus898Authorlazarus898

No he isn't 4 year old at 200 chps...I am not that slow

vieweye:Just asking at chapter 200 he is 4 years old???? Man i was hoping 200 chapters in hed be like 18+