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Monsieur_Dreamer
Monsieur_DreamerLv32yrMonsieur_Dreamer

I have a mixed feeling about this, while the writing quality is great when it comes to English, the characters just seems so flat. The MC hasn't shown any interesting qualities that makes him deserve to be the MC of the story.. Take Luffy as an example. He's an optimistic character who dreams big and it shows how much he's willing to do just to achieve it (not in a villainous way), it makes him very likeable and fitting as a main character while Ryuujin (idk if I spelled his name right) has never shown any qualities of a good MC.. It just feels like Ryuujin is in the story just for the sake of being in the story.. Maybe I'll change my opinion in the future but this is it for now..

Start of A Millionth Life - ONE PIECE!

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LookITSJamals9
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Most stories dont have to have the character exclaim a life goal a couple chapters in… It can take time to build up to it and idk what type of, “situation” you need to solidify Ryu as the MC in 6 chapters… Especially when each chapter is short

Monsieur_Dreamer
Monsieur_DreamerLv3Monsieur_Dreamer

Yeah, that's why I'm not against of having my opinion changed in the future since I planned to follow this story.The MC just doesn't give a good first impression like often MCs do..

LookITSJamals9:Most stories dont have to have the character exclaim a life goal a couple chapters in… It can take time to build up to it and idk what type of, “situation” you need to solidify Ryu as the MC in 6 chapters… Especially when each chapter is short