Review Detail of Arcdeal in My Hidden Destiny, Royalty or Love, Heart Made of Stone Sequel series

I'm new to this genre, so this may differ a lot from other reviews. The story at times feels rushed, there are some grammatical errors here and there, but those are not the main problems I've found in this story. The relationship between the main characters develops way too fast; some interactions feel unnatural, and sometimes they don't feel consistent. The first chapter was probably the best out of the first five. The story has some potential, and with some minor fixes, the story could reach new heights.