Review Detail of Blackcrust in ahdhjaiet

To me this is one of the stories which have apparent and gigantic potential. The background is easy to digest, interesting synopsis, engaging hooks that let you wanna know more. And most importantly the simple language that helped me gulp two chapters in matter of 2 minutes. I like an easy and engaging read. Recommed to this every one who are into dark dystopian world where mc being tormented both mentally and physically and then rising to the top. I noticed a few word repetition and missing comma-splices but all that ought to get better with further chapter since the author already seem to have good grip over the their writing style and vocabulary. An easy 5 stars to the author.