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Lord_StreakLv151yrLord_Streak

This novel is a smooth read. The flow of events doesn't feel forced. Despite the few chapter, the author has already managed to create vivid and well-eritten characters. Sophie is written in a way unique to her as is Kate, Felix and Raymond. This is pretty impressive characterization. The hooks in the first and tenth chapter are pretty engaging and draws the reader to be even more invested into the nove. One significant area of improvement is grammar, if grammar could be fixed, the novel would be pretty solid.

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Love or profession his temptation

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I will definitely work on that, 🙌🙌