Hello to all the readers who decided to stop by and gave my book a look. I am thankful for all the support and blessings of the reader who decided to spend time on my book. With this review, I wanted to point out some things. 1. As you saw in the title, it will be a harem and the mc will have five wives I will assure you that there will be no more addition. It will begin with five and end with five wives. 2. Some readers may find that interaction is quite less between mc and his wives and some feel that it had been late since mc wives are introduced. So, I wanted to tell you that Mc wives will be introduced one by one slowly. It was done so that Mc can grow up and before meeting his wives, he can at least have some achievements and strength. I don't want to write a story where mc runs after chasing girls where girls run after mc thinking he is so cool and wonderful and every hundred chapters another female lead is introduced which is making the story with harem quite bad. So, even if you dislike harem, I ask you to give you a try and judge with your own eyes how different the story is from other typical harem. 3.By the time, I write this review it hadn't been 6 months since I stated as an author.Reader may find some grammatical mistakes. Since I am not a native English person and I write on an old smartphone which hangs a lot while typing so I ask you to pardon me on that. But I will assure you that the story would be readable unlike my first books whose beginning grammar was quite bad.Even mtl trash grammar is better than my other book beginning. That's for all know and I hope you like it and support my WSA work.
Mohitkumar
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LIKEMohitkumar:It's already in the last arc. Just taken break. It going to be over soon
I’m on chapter 11 right now, but I was scrolling through and reading all of the chapter titles and it looks like he only meets one of his wives in the 60 chapters you have up. Is that true? I know you want to build up his strength and stuff, but that’s way too slow imo. At this rate it looks like his 5th wife would be introduced in chapter 500 or something lol.
AntiGod_01:Author, maybe you should make a discord server. And maybe you should advertise a bit. Your stories have a lot of potential.
AntiGod_01:Author, maybe you should make a discord server. And maybe you should advertise a bit. Your stories have a lot of potential.
Mandeer:I’m on chapter 11 right now, but I was scrolling through and reading all of the chapter titles and it looks like he only meets one of his wives in the 60 chapters you have up. Is that true? I know you want to build up his strength and stuff, but that’s way too slow imo. At this rate it looks like his 5th wife would be introduced in chapter 500 or something lol.
so are you gonna drop your first novel novel now? it had so much potential and the grammar on the recent chapter was also good if possible id like to ask you to pls not drop it
Mohitkumar:Actually, making a server is little difficult for now.
i have a question thought, you says that there will only 5 wives and no more but you have introduce his previous life lover (if i am not wrong it's Ava) and she says that they will meet soon. it will quit disapoint if he can not her (at least) to his harem, because the mc says in the chapter he is willing to sacrifice his life so he still in love with her, so if she come back and not avalable to reuinite with mc it will be quit dissapoint. that all i wanted say, waiting for your answer auther-sama
Arsene_Lionheart:i have a question thought, you says that there will only 5 wives and no more but you have introduce his previous life lover (if i am not wrong it's Ava) and she says that they will meet soon. it will quit disapoint if he can not her (at least) to his harem, because the mc says in the chapter he is willing to sacrifice his life so he still in love with her, so if she come back and not avalable to reuinite with mc it will be quit dissapoint. that all i wanted say, waiting for your answer auther-sama
i am in ver thought situation, i have my own probleme. the best solution i could find was to drop the novel but like you i have many people who don't want my novel to be droped. the best thing i can promise is that i will restat posting new chapter but not now i will an anoncement ans also there will also a change on the time of posting chapter. i hope you understand.
Alex081904:pls continue your Novel
Arsene_Lionheart:i am in ver thought situation, i have my own probleme. the best solution i could find was to drop the novel but like you i have many people who don't want my novel to be droped. the best thing i can promise is that i will restat posting new chapter but not now i will an anoncement ans also there will also a change on the time of posting chapter. i hope you understand.
Arsene_Lionheart:i have a question thought, you says that there will only 5 wives and no more but you have introduce his previous life lover (if i am not wrong it's Ava) and she says that they will meet soon. it will quit disapoint if he can not her (at least) to his harem, because the mc says in the chapter he is willing to sacrifice his life so he still in love with her, so if she come back and not avalable to reuinite with mc it will be quit dissapoint. that all i wanted say, waiting for your answer auther-sama
Hello Mohit, I really really like you novel The Extra's Survival. Your writing skill is improving chapter by chapter and volume by volume. Especially the plot is nicely thought out. I just wanted to help out by editing the released chapters so I can practice myself too. It's just an offer. It would be really nice to see this novel perfectly presented. You've done a good job on it. Please keep writing.
Sam0207:Hello Mohit, I really really like you novel The Extra's Survival. Your writing skill is improving chapter by chapter and volume by volume. Especially the plot is nicely thought out. I just wanted to help out by editing the released chapters so I can practice myself too. It's just an offer. It would be really nice to see this novel perfectly presented. You've done a good job on it. Please keep writing.
Mohitkumar:Thanks for offering the help.Can you contact me in discord at Mohitkumar#7818
Mohitkumar:Thanks for offering the help.Can you contact me in discord at Mohitkumar#7818