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Review Detail of Mathdebate in Gangster System: I Will Become The Greatest Gangster!

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Had a childish tone but wants to portray a badass mature protagonist, the style of writing doesn't fit the book and way too many cliche's. Background is subpar with typical predictable settings and history with things just falling into the protagonist hands when he wants it, walks home sees perfect member, walks around finds perfect base and fighters. Things don't work like that unless the "system" is involved but the author tries to pass it off as natural. tldr: this book is a misfit of ideas in one.

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