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So far (chapter 135) the story is shallow, nothing is really in-depth or has time for it, the MC becomes a sociopath just because and thinks that calling aristocrats 'fat' is something humiliating. There are millions of forms of torture but she thinks the one that would affect the most would be rape... she feels like creating a kingdom just because, the time estimate is all fucked up and the author can't decide how long a trip takes , the romantic aspect is interpreted and simply from one day to the next all kinds of drama happens to start the romance, in addition to the obvious fact that the MC is basically of inferior intellect since everything she does is done without thinking about the consequences and guess what: there is no consequence, although an action and adventure novel is really very good, the problem is really this nonsense and some chapters that don't add anything as it seems totally artificial (especially these last chapters that seem like the author was in heat). I'll keep reading and hoping it gets better

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Reborn As A Ghost: Time To Build My Undead Army!

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I dropped it in chapter 169, I simply can't take this novel anymore, I feel nothing but anger towards the characters, especially the MC who, besides being a pervert on any woman that appears, has endless shallow monologues that don't deepen the character, I honestly I just hope she dies and this ends soon. The group's internal "conflicts" always end in 2 paragraphs and always end with everyone agreeing with the MC's "wonderful" idea. It just seems like a wish-fulfillment novel only worse, if you can make it worse. Every time a new internal conflict of the character appeared I couldn't care, the part where she feels more and more monstrous I just wanted her to go fuck herself, she acts like a 15 year old girl who only has hormones and eyes for beautiful people, since chapter 98 I start to hesitate to go to the next one because I know that I'm going to get angry and even so I tried to bear it but I couldn't, I haven't read other books by the author but if the dialogues are at this level in the other books So dialogue is certainly not this human being's strong point

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