Review Detail of ZoiNekros in Reborn As A Ghost: Time To Build My Undead Army!
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It's an enjoyable novel if you don't mind the "cliché" structure/direction "reincarnated human as a monster" novels have. Idk if it's what the author wanted but when Maria starts to think about everything and loses the focus of the main problem/thing she was thinking about (sorry for the reiteration😓) the writing starts to feel dense or reiterative. I also liked the way the chapters are started. Overlapping a little bit with the end of the last one is a nice way to keep on track if the lector reads them at different times(?) (different days, hours, etc. I don't know if I said the correct expression). Although I like the feature, sometimes they are a copy of the last chapter, making it difficult to enjoy reading the same thing again, or they start before the ending of the last chapter, making it confusing to follow when little details change. I've only read the start of this adventure and I'm sure the author is improving (and will continue to improve) the quality of their writing.
Reborn As A Ghost: Time To Build My Undead Army!
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Yeah youre right, I started writing this novel in august of 2021, so i was still learning about pacing, story structuration, and focus on story progression, so there are some sloppy parts, and also some that have too many details sometimes in things that dont really matter that much, although i enjoyed writing them, i can tell that sometimes people dont care about several chapters of making potions or equipment, i've learned since then that even these things must have a connection with the main plot or tings just lose their focus and progression, though those chapters are now in the past, the last 200 chapters so far have been about a lot of progression and action, so i hope you can continue