This story have potential, it is interesting and prose The things are well placed characters personalities are defining. You are doing nice work~~ Keep up the good work author, I'll be reading
Plafu
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LIKEKinshikanata:Author you can try website call Grammar look up When used with grammarly and docs it is very good for editing
Fist of all thank you for your feedback and second I know that is not the best I’ not good with grammar and it is not even my main language but still thanks for your f eedback
Nekotakuu:In synopsis mother who live in china* Not which live in china
Author you can try website call Grammar look up When used with grammarly and docs it is very good for editing
Plafu:Fist of all thank you for your feedback and second I know that is not the best I’ not good with grammar and it is not even my main language but still thanks for your f eedback