Review Detail of Malthemute in Lost Soul: Nine-tailed Fox's Transmigrations!

So I haven't read too much, but it's a good world with lots of details and seems interesting, but the story as a whole just moves way to god damn fast. It's like the author has a checklist of tags and cool things they want to do in the first 20 or chapters the MC is naive to an un-godly degree. Making the story just hard to read. We also keep moving the perspective character around and around even within the same chapter, and it is just head-ache-inducing. I think it is a story with a well-built world and potential, but there was next to no thought put into the novel's start whatsoever.