the story in general has a great potential, the writing style is good and the characters are written in agood way . the synopsis hooked me right away and found my self reading the whole thing . the only remarkable thing is that i want the author to tell us how he lived befire even more , he show jt in the prologue under the name vjctor but somehkw i want more .. i want the comparison between his previous and his new world. Don't get me wrong , the story is in its early chaps and there js a lot going on ... i d like everyone to read it because it is good with a plot that i never seen on webnovel so...it has a great permise . the author is nice and he replies to every question and the updates are stable and more then enough for me ... good luck author
Venusean
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LIKEhow to not be an Olympian. was an amazing read. I'm so sad you stopped writing it .please don't give up writing. your skills are divine. honestly. I beg you
Venusean:Thank you for your review.