So here is an honest review... Firstly the story build-up was simply amazing. The whole arc with the goblin was grand and magnificent. The recent developments are also breathtaking. The characters are also very fleshed out. Dereck and all the others introduced seem very distinct. The writing style is just on another level, provides a deep immersion space not gonna lie. But there are some grammatical mistakes but not that noticeable and don't break the flow of the story. The world background is a little not my cup of tea but still very good. The common, uncommon etc kinda system is wierd and doesn't fit well with the story but hey maybe that is just me. And I see why the author has introduced it like that (to maintain the racial hierarch and power scaling of the novel) The updating stability is top notch, keep it up. Overall a hidden gem, very unique and has a different take on world building and the concept of immortality.
Wahi
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LIKEAs I said, there are grammatical mistakes. And I personally didn't find them too noticing. But your experience could be different.
Mr_Babbles:idk bro, I noticed grammar mistakes literally everywhere