Review Detail of Skyriano in I Have A Cheat System In The Apocalypse
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The story is not bad, I'm on chapter 14 and I still can't understand several things. For example, he is in an academy protected by a great mutant, but some policemen with a robot decide to attack them, I don't understand the thought of trying to defeat such a powerful mutant with policemen. Second, apparently it's normal to kill each other at school, I don't know if it's a satire of the United States or what. Third, a student is able to infiltrate an intelligent humanoid beast capable of murdering students, let's remember that we are in a school with powerful mutants. Fourth, upon "dying" he wakes up in a Battle Royale, and apparently an administrator tries to kill him for no reason, which is then turned into an MMORPG-like game. And that I'm only going for chapter 14. I think the story has potential, but it needs to correct several things.
I Have A Cheat System In The Apocalypse
DMC_MAX
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First of all- just because you're a powerful mutant doesn't mean you're immune to firearms Second- They're not normal police officers but elites specially trained to hunt down elites Third- This is the apocalypse, it's normal for mutants to kill each other since no rules apply here Fourth- I'd give you a spoiler by telling you it wasn't a student that sneaked a monster into the school Fifth- If there's one thing gods in this book enjoy is toying with lives Your review was nice though, and that's why I liked it. The reason I gave a reply is because you seem reasonable, and I wouldn't want people misunderstanding my book. [img=recommend]
hmm interesting how easy you can explain this but none of that is in the actual story. Wonder why its confusing afđ¤
DMC_MAX:First of all- just because you're a powerful mutant doesn't mean you're immune to firearms Second- They're not normal police officers but elites specially trained to hunt down elites Third- This is the apocalypse, it's normal for mutants to kill each other since no rules apply here Fourth- I'd give you a spoiler by telling you it wasn't a student that sneaked a monster into the school Fifth- If there's one thing gods in this book enjoy is toying with lives Your review was nice though, and that's why I liked it. The reason I gave a reply is because you seem reasonable, and I wouldn't want people misunderstanding my book. [img=recommend]
Saltyfig:hmm interesting how easy you can explain this but none of that is in the actual story. Wonder why its confusing afđ¤
Haha sure bud. This "story" is all over the place, you need a lot more than common sense to piece this disaster together. Huge lack of info in this dumpster fire
DMC_MAX:Because it requires common sense to piece it together
Common sense you donât seem to have apparently. Youâre basically the only one who can understand this story while the readers struggle to understand basically everything. Hopefully youâll learn from your mistakes if you ever make a new novel.
DMC_MAX:Because it requires common sense to piece it together
Dao_Of_Sauce:Common sense you donât seem to have apparently. Youâre basically the only one who can understand this story while the readers struggle to understand basically everything. Hopefully youâll learn from your mistakes if you ever make a new novel.
The reason itâs so easy for you to understand is because your the author. I didnât think that would be too hard for you to figure out. Since youâre the one writing the story, even if it doesnât make any sense to the readers, itâll make sense to you because itâs your ideas your putting onto text.
DMC_MAX:Hah, if I can understand... Why can't you? I can't waste my time with you