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This story is about magic, and I really like fantasy stories. I think this story is interesting. You know how to convey a storyline to a reader. Some books have a difficult story to understand. You narrate in detail the expressions of the characters. For example, their facial reactions, their moods, their behavior. As a reader, I do not feel bored while reading. Because I can feel what the character is feeling. Good job, author. May your book succeed in the future. 🙂