Review Detail of Mr_Morning_Star in The Mafia Couple

Writing Quality: The writing is good paragpraphing wise and punctuation. Story Development: The pacing seems a bit fast but sometimes that can hold onto the readers attention more and helps with progression. Character Design: The characters are well fleshed out especially Jason and they don't feel bland. Although some more background is needed to say for sure and we will probably get that later. World Background: I will say the background description and the way you portray the atmosphere can be detrimental to the story so maybe some more detail would be appreciated. Overall the story feels very interesting and draws me in even though this is not particularly my cup of tea. Enjoy this great read!💙