Review Detail of Book_Pen in Beneath The Cloudy Sky

Love the plot and the way the author made it intriguing. The writing style protrays how author wants to add every emotion to make it fun, sad and excited at the same time. Good work!! However, they are a few points that I kind of didn't like(purely personnel opinion). The length of the chapters, the sudden and at once throw of character info, the way the author differentiated two places or scenarios. I feel such a good plot and a fantastic writing skill shouldn't be hindered by some minute details. But frankly, love the plot and execution!