Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in The Alicole Witch and the Demon Prince

Here is my review based on what I read so far: Story Development: I think the progress of the story is okay, but the direction and where the plot goes for me is quite messy in my opinion. First of all, Chapter 1-2 already set something interesting will happen than all of sudden Chapter 3 The MC just go to the Academy without even mentioning the previous or doing something after the event of Chapter 1-2 happen. It felt The previous two chapters are never exist. However, that problem can be fix by giving more mention about the previous thing or at least an inner monologue for The MC World Background; The world-building for me is quite interesting as there is magic and mythical creature, also many other things. However, , the world can be more fleshed out especially if the author explore of the environment or the description of the environment. Character Design: Alika for me is a final character and I think she will have a good development with the main Male Lead. While the side characters, I think they are all okay. However, I think Alika backstory can be more flesh out or the event after Chapter 2 occurred like how she got to the academy and many more. Overall that's all I have to say about this novel and good luck.