this had some potential, but the author ruined it with grammar so bad you'd think it was written by a 5-year old on cocaine and by making MC an idiot. then again considering that the author ain't the sharpest tool in the shed, I suppose expecting him to make an mc with even average intelligence is kinda stupid on my part. I dropped this at around Chapter 5-6 I think? I dropped when the idiot of an author decided to make the equally dumb MC propose to his sister. I mean seriously? I know nothing about his sister, I don't know her as a character or anything so seeing him propose marriage to a woman I know nothing about was nothing but cringe and pathetic. especially when the sister said she was willing to have a s*x buddy relationship. what kinda wimp would choose marriage over a s*xual relationship? honestly at this point I feel that author wrote this novel as a joke, not realising he made himself the joke.
Perverted_Fella
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LIKEI agree about what you said about the plot and all that. Yes, I wrote this novel for fun, I mentioned that in the review section. However, I disagree about what you said concerning the grammar. Please, make research before talking 😒. There are several types of writing styles and mine is unique and a bit complicated. I wrote the novel in the first person using the present continuous tense. So, I think you are the one high on weed here. 🤷♀️