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Review Detail of CokeWhale in The Witch Hunter System

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CokeWhale
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This story moves crazy slow. The lack of progress and constant POV switches to fairly unimportant characters is getting really tiring. Dialogue is also used or exposition at least half the time, and it makes everyone sound fake. Oh, and like so many of these types of stories, the MC knows literally everything for essentially no reason. This "super intelligent" MC got killed in a completely avoidable way and lucked into getting revived at the start. It's not a great character. Decently entertaining story, but not good writing.

The Witch Hunter System

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CokeWhale
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Dialogue is also used >as< exposition*

6_Void_King_9
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Couldn't have agreed more which I had seen your review before committing to 80 chapters. I posted my review which resounded similarly to yours.

6_Void_King_9
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wish*

6_Void_King_9:Couldn't have agreed more which I had seen your review before committing to 80 chapters. I posted my review which resounded similarly to yours.
DaoistopyAPY
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gracias por ahórrame el tiempo de leer esto