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RestingTree
RestingTreeLv41yrRestingTree

Its good if you like it off the first like 10 chapters, but personally, not for me. The parallel-worlds early-guide character litterally tells him "The other leo was a calm and composed person known for having a cool-head", and he says "I do aswell just not around you", bro litterally has never had a cool-head or thought about any parts of his situation in detail at all. The writings good but the moods casual on the border of comedic, but it fails to be comedic and just ends up reading like someone else telling a story while focusing on something else like, "Yeah and there was this one guy who asked me to fight him and I didnt really feel like it but hey it was a then and there thing".

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Magic System in a Parallel World

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