Review Detail of Vanaxity in Magic System in a Parallel World

Magic System in a Parallel World is a story about Leo, an ordinary student who was suddenly transferred to a parallel world with magic and vampires. Furthermore, he gains a magic system. So, I had this thought when I read Cultivation Online, but I don't know why this has such high rating. This is below-average at best. Honestly, I feel like I could ramble on forever about the ridiculous amounts of small problems that rapidly accumulate in both novels. Writing quality is meh. There isn't many obvious mistakes and such, but it definitely reads like a amateurish novel. (3/5 stars) Story development is incomprehensible. The conclusions people jump to and lack of consistency is relatively jarring. Main character transmigrates to a world of magic in vampires without knowing. He runs into the nurse, and she "finds out" he is from a parallel world. With zero prompt from the main character, she assumes hes from a parallel world. (It's later revealed she doesn't completely believe it) Either way, it's genuinely the most incomprehensible conclusion I've seen someone jump to, especially since there is zero precedent for transmigration in this world. I do imagine though, that there is brainwashing magic/magic that can transform you into someone else. Furthermore, the fact that the nurse didn't just assume the main character had some problems in the head is weird as well. Anyway, from what I can tell it's basically the same as Cultivation Online. Main character has so much potential it rivals Saitama, he has luck that would even make Fortuna jealous, etc. Aside from this, the author clearly doesn't know what amnesia is. (The excuse he gives to everyone is that he as amnesia, as the previous Leo was known as dead for 3 months, and this is a parallel world) Even if you had amnesia, you wouldn't just "forget" how to use a sword/combat techniques. Partly due to muscle memory, partly due to the fact that you don't forget these types of skills even with amnesia. (3/5 stars) Alright, I may have lumped in some problems that I had with the character design in with the story development, but they are closely related. It genuinely frustrates me with how little intelligence the main character has. Listen, I get that Yuan from Cultivation Online was naive and stupid, he was crippled and stuck in a bed. However, Leo is incomprehensibly stupid, he should be put in special ed classes. Everyone immediately finds out hes from a parallel world, because for some reason this is just a common conclusion to jump to. (again, no precedent for this) He is almost immediately found out that he can use dark magic. Main character doesn't realize that the spirit girl with white hair and red eyes + dark affinity isn't a vampire. (he literally just got told about the traits of vampires) Main character doesn't know why he should hide the fact hes from a parallel world. Main character doesn't realize he should probably keep his dark affinity hidden. (Original Leo who "died" couldn't use magic) Also, why didn't the nurse assume hes a vampire using some unique magic? He suddenly died, came back to life, and suddenly has a dark affinity. If this doesn't scream "this is a vampire plot" I don't know what does. Furthermore, he claims he has amnesia, but suddenly turned super-smart in all subjects? It honestly seems forced how no one has found out. The main character might as well just admit hes from a parallel world at this point. My least favorite part about this novel is how much of a beta the main character is. In ten chapters hes already been peeped on three times forcibly. A ghost in a shower, someone literally tying him up, and the nurse. Furthermore, he literally gets tied up and beaten by a girl and based on his spineless character he won't do anything about it. Super disappointing. (1/5 stars) World background is meh as well. I haven't read too far into it, but it's just the general magic academy where assault is legal. Everyone is a psychopath besides the main character, etc. Novel original had a interesting take with vampires and magic, it's relatively unique, but the other problems weigh down the novel way too much. (3/5 stars) Overall, it's a below-average novel. If the author's previous works are anything to go by, nothing will really change from the start. Story development isn't terribly unique, and character design is downright awful. I give this novel 3.0 stars out of 5.