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Here are my honest thoughts so far about this novel based on What I read so far about this book and very sorry I'm did this late because of couple of busy things happening: World Background: So far the world background is some kind in survival arena which is quite interesting. I do like that this story is a battle royale type of story, but there is a little bit flaw that can be fix. Which is giving little bit more detail about the environment starting from the ground or unique things of the world. Overall, so far the world background is okay. Story Development: I think there is a big set up about this story as each chapter the plot is processing and mostly introduce couple of interesting things as it goes on. There are also some mysteries being introduce in this world and it can be fleshed out more especially how the battle royale works. Character Design; I think they are all fine as for now as the characters are well diverse in terms of personalities. I also like this novel chose to name number for the character which is quite unique concept As for the Main Character 333, he is alright I guess especially with his snarky personality, but I think you can give 333 deeper exploration and a clear goal or motivation on joining the survival game. Also 333 so far is quite passive as the MC, therefore you can give him more active role in the ongoing chapters. I think that's all I have to say about this novel and the writing quality of this novel is quite fine since it has description about the situation and I do like the first person commentary of 333 Overall, Good Jod and Good luck!!!

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