Review Detail of Ashton_A in Immortality System: The Last Human's Transmigration
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Honestly the concept seems fine, it's just that every chapter leaves you confused with what's going on. The author might not see the issue because he inherently knows what's going on due to him being the one who wrote it but it is very confusing in every chapter. Chapter 1, you have no clue what's going on the entire chapter so it feels like your just reading filler text and the point is, elf bad, bad elf kill mc friend, mc sad, bad elf sad, bigger bad elf says stuff, mc dies, some guy appears, big confusing battle with other guy which I can't tell if he's the same guy or not as the other guy, etc. That was the most understandable chapter from what I've read, only chapter 2 was decent
Immortality System: The Last Human's Transmigration
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Some battles are confusing, I agree. The writing is very good. Plot is good and all, but even at chapter 98, it still feels like the story barely scratched the surface when it comes to the magnitude of it. Which either means bad pacing or a grand ambition from the Author. I am getting annoyed by the fact though, that after chapter 98 there hasn't been a chapter other than the privilege in a while now. Like, do you only write for privilege now? Or did you promise some unrealistic promises(expand priv readers' benefits) to priv readers, just to get burned out like some other Authors in the end? i just get infuriated when WN so kindly reminds me, that there is a new chapter for this novel, only for me to realize that only privilege chapters got updated, which means nothing to me.
