Review Detail of Darkone33 in Vampire Lord's Demonic Wives

I get the feeling that English is not this person's first language. combine that with the fact that they don't really edit and you get really weird sentence structure that doesn't make sense. or that just flows terribly together. you can probably understand about 60 to 70% of it. but when it happens it's really jarring. really turns you off to keep reading. I shouldn't need to decode my books to read them.