The story flows nicely, however at the start, it does seem like the female MC is a tad of a pushover and there’s not really much to suggest coercion into the marriage. Would prefer more background of coercion on her aunt and uncle’s part, rather than being sold as a bride. It will form the crux of tragedy if this was done. Overall, keep up the good work.
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