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Enticement
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The 3 high stars are all easily explainable. World background is great considering the exposure to the landscape of the new world albeit a little lacking in his homeworld. Writing quality also has little to no issues. For the story development, the author incorporated several situations from both korean and chinese novels. It wasn't well done, honestly. Some details don't match up such as the 6 years timeline (seems really weird to me that the mc barely developed in 6 years). There's also the fact that the mc should've been 11 yrs old at the start of that 6 years (Are 11yr old even allowed to go to dungeons?). Many more inconsistencies are visible as the story progresses. Character design is kinda weird and what I'm most disappointed with. The mc seems to revolve from being an edgy system mc, arrogant cultivation mc, young master, and shounen mc. Read at least all the free chapters and you should realise what I mean. What really ticked me off though was how you highlighted his determination to save his mother time and time again and made it his primary goal (power to go back and cure to save his mother). Now he had the chance to win the cure yet he decided to nerf himself INCLUDING the finals where he nearly lost (Note the word on that chapter: "barely concious"). Is that the resolve of a son trying to save his mother?? That was so disappointing. In fact, knowing the princess' character, would she even take the fact that damien held back well? An anticlimactic tourna end is a million times better. Seems to me that the author decided to forgo the story up to the tournament as well as the MC's goals just to provide a thrilling fight.

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CHAOS_FOOLISH
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Hello, since you have read the work, could you answer some questions, please? Well, if you can, the questions are as follows: is there ntr in the work? (I hope not), is there Yuri in the work? (I hope not), is there a yandere? Does MC really love girls? Or does he just use them and discard them? and how many girls are in the harem... if you could answer I would appreciate it! :D and forgive me for my bad English... (a guy said that a girl from MC was raped and is it true?! I hope not...

Enticement
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I didn't get that far, not with "r*pe" scene (whatever chapter that was). There were 2 girls with the mc, and 1 ongoing (not official) by the time I stopped. Nope, there wasn't any ntr (again, at least in the chapter I stopped). Yes, the mc loves girls and did not discard them (They went separate ways in the same world to pursue strength though). I forgot if there were any yandere tendencies among them. I also forgot if there were yuri scenes (I think, no).

CHAOS_FOOLISH:Hello, since you have read the work, could you answer some questions, please? Well, if you can, the questions are as follows: is there ntr in the work? (I hope not), is there Yuri in the work? (I hope not), is there a yandere? Does MC really love girls? Or does he just use them and discard them? and how many girls are in the harem... if you could answer I would appreciate it! :D and forgive me for my bad English... (a guy said that a girl from MC was raped and is it true?! I hope not...