Review Detail of Mtotheizow in Void Evolution System
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Great concept and strong start, however i cannot get past the terrible dialogue. The main character really said "Wow! you werent kidding about your cooking skills. This is wifey-level skill right here for sure! Someone needs to wife you up ASAP!" Like bro nobody talks like that. I'm convinced the Author's an incel thats never talked to a woman before cuz theres just no way. Its just one of the examples but thats the one that made me stop i just couldnt push thru anymore.
Void Evolution System
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That is actually normal for the mc, because in the duongen, he basically lost touch with humanity because of the trauma, and beast instincts taking over, so to try to reconnect with it, he acted like most staryo typical characters with cringe lines, he made that his personality untill he started to grow his own, and understood his problems and the fact that he subconsciously forgot the emotions he felt during his time there, you see it in the later chapters.