Review Detail of B_L_A_C_K_Soul in Void Evolution System

A good try at writing a novel but don't expect anything great. Powerups without rhyme or reason, stupid story development and just plain bad world background. This could have been so so much more as the part on earth sets things up nicely but then everything collapses. The only other good thing is the writing quality. If the content of the story would be more refined and properly paced, the writing quality would be perfect. Unfortunatly, good writing can not realy save a bad story in my books. Still, I thank you author for trying to write :) Who knows, maybe you will get better and better with time?