Review Detail of YoungMasterMeng in Undying Warlord
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A pushover+ a nanny mc? He should just solo than taking care of those pigs see what happened he almost died. LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
Undying Warlord
HideousGrain
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Your title SCREAMS shitty human isekai mc land in World on The monster side, convince monsters they actually dont want to be evil and their nature is totally a choice so now they are all living holding hands and singing in harmony and suddenly stuff like orcs, goblins, warewolves etc. Dumb monsters goes from intilligent 7(barely able to learn speech) to int 14 capable of understanding abstrakt concept and skilled work, such as good and evil, right and wrong and why fighting your natural urges to it's opposite is positive for them (which it would never be as it utterly fucks the mind), and leaning high lvl construction from a piece of crappy instructions by a manchild who wouldn't even know how to himself.. And every hot female ofc wanna fall on mc dick bc plot reason :/ etc ... Sooo does your mc follow this route? Did I guess right by the ten seconds of reading your title ;) Yer, that's why puerile gives these airy shit, too much bait and switch with retarded reasoning and every one is tired of it. ... if you want to write something new that would instantly pull a large crowd, then write an ACTUAL villain where his monster subs and him are actually behaving as you would expect from their races and status (ow which is also constantly there in every shit novel the entire "dont call me master don't bow, we are equal, ow do you like to call me master" all that pussy shit bc mc is a pathetic existence that even when given power of gods are still acting sip fking pathetic, unsure/nervous/unconfident) ... Its very tiresome
HideousGrain:Sigh, first, he is not a pushover, and second he needs others for numerous reasons.
Then why no retaliation after being robbed and shot ? Is he a Saint that love all being and would he say “I forgive them for they do not know what they are doing.”
HideousGrain:Sigh, first, he is not a pushover, and second he needs others for numerous reasons.
He retaliated a bit tho. He was not really able todo something stupid because he has to figure out what is going (whether it is the small group in the hospital, or the entire Primordial Ascension)
YoungMasterMeng:Then why no retaliation after being robbed and shot ? Is he a Saint that love all being and would he say “I forgive them for they do not know what they are doing.”
HideousGrain:Sigh, first, he is not a pushover, and second he needs others for numerous reasons.
Is this a kingdom building too? If it is then all Apocalypse(something that has zombie) theme novel i’ve read is no different each(armipotent, blood warlock, etc)
HideousGrain:Sigh, first, he is not a pushover, and second he needs others for numerous reasons.
YoungMasterMeng:Is this a kingdom building too? If it is then all Apocalypse(something that has zombie) theme novel i’ve read is no different each(armipotent, blood warlock, etc)
YoungMasterMeng:Is this a kingdom building too? If it is then all Apocalypse(something that has zombie) theme novel i’ve read is no different each(armipotent, blood warlock, etc)
HideousGrain:He retaliated a bit tho. He was not really able todo something stupid because he has to figure out what is going (whether it is the small group in the hospital, or the entire Primordial Ascension)
I just wanna say this, would you rather prefer the MC to die while retaliating when he was being robbed? I think you forgot that the people who robbed him had guns which the MC certainly cant evade a gun with his current strength. Its better for him to live than to die merely over being robbed also if you read further, he did do something to the robber. Also what they robbed from him doesn't have a lot of effect on the MC, he still is stronger than those who robbed him in the end.
YoungMasterMeng:Then why no retaliation after being robbed and shot ? Is he a Saint that love all being and would he say “I forgive them for they do not know what they are doing.”
He is too rational and its not good sometimes , he could left the shelter and throw a stone to lure the zombies into them
Jagabani:I just wanna say this, would you rather prefer the MC to die while retaliating when he was being robbed? I think you forgot that the people who robbed him had guns which the MC certainly cant evade a gun with his current strength. Its better for him to live than to die merely over being robbed also if you read further, he did do something to the robber. Also what they robbed from him doesn't have a lot of effect on the MC, he still is stronger than those who robbed him in the end.
Jagabani:I just wanna say this, would you rather prefer the MC to die while retaliating when he was being robbed? I think you forgot that the people who robbed him had guns which the MC certainly cant evade a gun with his current strength. Its better for him to live than to die merely over being robbed also if you read further, he did do something to the robber. Also what they robbed from him doesn't have a lot of effect on the MC, he still is stronger than those who robbed him in the end.
what do you mean by being rational? I think he is patient enough. Also if he had thrown a stone to lure in the zombies then, that will destroy the MC's character. It will create lots of loopholes in his behaviour AND he should definitely not do that over a mere rob, that is not worthy to be mention. That is just my opinion
YoungMasterMeng: He is too rational and its not good sometimes , he could left the shelter and throw a stone to lure the zombies into them
I don't think he did anything to the girl who shot him ( i don't even remember) but you do know clearly why the girl shot him, and its definitely a mistake. After she did apologise in the end and felt bad for it.
YoungMasterMeng:He did something to the girl who shoot him? And left this novel long ago
HideousGrain:Sigh, first, he is not a pushover, and second he needs others for numerous reasons.