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Read till chapter 60 and I am dropping. Lemme give some reasons: 1. Next to NO WorldBuilding. The story starts with an interesting premise but nothing is told of what happened in the two weeks. It just randomly states what will happen without any reason. The details are too around the bush and I am not able to form the mental image of the scenes in the story unlike the other novels. I don’t get how the environment looks, how the characters look, how the school is structured. Literall no world building at all. 2. Stupid/ weak minded MC: MC was good at the beginning but after aome time he just suddenly started making elementary mistakes which were eay out of character. Seriously, I could see the floor collapsing a whole chapters before it happenned and you are saying that neither the MC not fully trained cops did not even notice. STUPID!!! Dude literally got raped by his own crush with no confirmation of their relationships apart from a few sentenced amidst the chaos when one of them was not even fully concious.( Bro, swap the genders in that scene and see what happens in the comments. It would be scandalous if a guy have sex with a girl who cannot move and he knows that). Morover that rape scene was not emasculating. The whole mood was ruined. 3. Shitty harem: bro literally made the two his wives and the moment he is reunited with his childhood friend, he starts acting like a simp. And morover, even after all they went through, he was still treating both of em the same way he treated em when they first met. No signs of any closenes whatsoever. There is a thing called Suspension Bridge Effect man. 4. Useless System: apart from increasing basic stats, bo other use for the system. It is the shittiest system Ive seen till now. And mc doesn’t even try to explore his system. He’s just after that freaking merchant the whole time. Like hell man!! I got a few more but I think this long a length is enough

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