Review Detail of Dany_K_9260 in Rise of the Malactric Heir

Only positive thing i can say is the consistency but story wise.. -MC’s setting is he isn’t scared to die, not like a hero sacrificing themself but a person that just gave up on life. -MC also says he’ll do what he wants to live life his way and to the fullest which contradicts his idgaf mindset. Then there’s the weak writing in style, punctuation, and logic. Feels like it goes fast, then slow, then fast again randomly. Also doesn’t help that using audio makes the chapter feel like one long sentence. *niche irk: using “ and ‘ interchangeably when characters talk and not when thinking. It’s like your 100th novel… come on :/