Review Detail of Yarakiri in Odyssey of the Blind God
Review detail
Honestly just disappointed. (I'm only at 40 chapters) The story promises with a decent plot. But marred by a lack of creativity from the author. History boils down to coincidence after coincidence. That's it, nothing more to add. This remains a decent story to read but is sorely lacking in realism.
Odyssey of the Blind God
HideousGrain
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Spoilers!!! For example the fact that his parents win the lottery for the library which then makes Melvin discover the truth about the disease. Who then confesses everything to his father in the room with the presence of 2 people who pass by chance at the same time in the city and who are in the chef's room at the same time, is this isn't a chain of coincidences I do not know what it is. In fact if it happened just once, it would be ok, clearly possible. But there were many before and more after. Btw I'm going to keep reading since I have nothing to read right now, but it's hard...
HideousGrain:I'm pretty sure that you are just too impatient because all these events are no coincidence. But have fun. I hope you find a book you will like :d
Oh also! Please stop the mini spoilers in some chapters, it's useless and it ruins everything. Like this one: "Little did she know that her prediction was spot on, and that they would not only encounter each other soon again but that their encounter would be different than anything she could expect."
HideousGrain:I'm pretty sure that you are just too impatient because all these events are no coincidence. But have fun. I hope you find a book you will like :d
Yarakiri:Oh also! Please stop the mini spoilers in some chapters, it's useless and it ruins everything. Like this one: "Little did she know that her prediction was spot on, and that they would not only encounter each other soon again but that their encounter would be different than anything she could expect."
