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DrGrace
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I can't believe that you're the same author for undying warlord as well, that novel has loads of action, good story and everything, I'm not saying that this novel isn't good, out I wouldn't have reached ch106 šŸ˜… but author why does so many paragraphs repeat the same content? over and over again? it's so frustrating! If you accept critique I would like to say it needs more 'direct' words to it, thoughts and inner monologue are ok but the repeating content frustrated me so much šŸ˜­ other than that everything is lovely šŸ‘ p.s I love undying warlord

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Odyssey of the Blind God

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HideousGrain
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thanks for you criticism, I will take it into consideration, and try to improve over time. Glad you like my novels ;)