Review Detail of Dennis_Roedlich in Odyssey of the Blind God

Great story…my only complaint is the authors use of the word ‘owing’ non stop…every time you use it in the story it drastically takes you out of the story. Instead change the word I to ‘due’ as In “he broke through ’due’ to blah blah blah” instead of owing. Idk it’ a minor thing that irks me. But amazing story!