Review Detail of DrVulgariusDogez in The Lore

This is a review for 7 chapters so I don't know if improvements were implemented. The quality of writing needs refurbishing. Please revisit some grammatical and punctuation lectures or hire an editor. The sentences are bearable, but as an author, one is obliged to at least give a pleasant experience to the readers. The stability of updates is quite alright and allows the author to reflect more. If this is your first novel then it is good to start slow and learn. For story development, since we are still at 7 chaps, then I'd forgive the development of the story. For the world background, it is not described vividly. Characters are quite hollow at the moment. Please define your character as detailed as possible. No need to write the intricacies of your characters in the novel itself. As long as you have a clear definition of the traits of your character and it will aid you till the end of your characters' lifespan.