Review Detail of AnotherAtlas in MHA: Heavenly Demon (Reboot)

The writing style is quite bad. The words and sentences are very basic, yet the author still tries to describe everything. It's also not split into paragraphs, so what you'll be looking at is a wall of text. Mc describing his mother as 'beautiful' makes my skin shiver, as it screams of the generic jade beauty descriptions that chinese novels have. Updates are fairly slow. Story development is generic for a mha fanfic. The title of the story and the mc's introduction makes you have certain expectations, but all you get is a manchild. For his old ass, he sure is acting young. The world was changed slightly to suit the author's story. Not much else I can say.