Review Detail of naffan in How I Became the Succubus' Alpha and Saved the World

Reviewed after 11 chapters: Very good novel :) One thing to note, there is a lot of jumping around in the early chapter. However, it doesn't matter, as the author has done a great job making it easy to follow along without getting confused. Also, from my untrained eye, I didn't notice any grammar problems. I hope to see more of Samael. I was glad to start getting some backstory on him and I'm very interested to know more about the executioner blades. Keep up the excellent work author, don't drop!