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BlackFan
BlackFanLv51yrBlackFan

Man. I did try to read this, but this story and its MC are so dumb that i couldn't even pass the 3º chapter. To me, the worst part is the suicide tendencies of the MC. How he was so happy to exchange 20 years of his life with the ability to do some fancy punches. We all know that later there will be all kind of plot armor that will let him recover his lost life and even live uncountable years, but even so... In conclusion: This is a dumb story made by a dumb author for dumb readers. I wish them an happy and long relation.

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My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts

I'm Really Not Xu Xian

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UltimateGodlyGene
UltimateGodlyGeneLv13UltimateGodlyGene

No you can't review a book unless you understand more or less what it is. Do you understand the pacing, the personalities,. The world background within 3 chapters. Don't give a stupid reason to justify your rating. And this is fantasy, can't you fucking read a novel, are you basing thing on relation to real life. OMG

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Rosefer_Ancot
Rosefer_AncotLv3Rosefer_Ancot

For me, you are the dumb one who reviewing a novel in just 3 chapters. Imagine if you are reincarnated and you will not used your cheat. Because You are afraid losing a lifespan that can be recovered in the future.Theb who is dumb now??

BlackFan
BlackFanLv5BlackFan

What is the problem in reviewing with just 3 chapters? Don't tell me that you are that kind of fool that reads 200 or even a 1000 chapters of something he doesn't like before reviewing it just because of some random rule he saw some other fool make in some random website? And what is that about lifespan that can be recovered in the future just because the MC is reincarnated or transmigrated-whatever? Are you also one of those looser writer that "thinks" that any plot armor is justified to help the MC's wish fulfilment? Or maybe you are a little homeless troll in training? If so you should find your food elsewhere, i already have other trolls to feed.

Rosefer_Ancot:For me, you are the dumb one who reviewing a novel in just 3 chapters. Imagine if you are reincarnated and you will not used your cheat. Because You are afraid losing a lifespan that can be recovered in the future.Theb who is dumb now??
OnlyTimeIsLost
OnlyTimeIsLostLv15OnlyTimeIsLost

The problem with reviewing after only 3 chapters is like reading only the prologe of a book. I mean sure you can quite there but it doesn't represent the full book.

BlackFan:What is the problem in reviewing with just 3 chapters? Don't tell me that you are that kind of fool that reads 200 or even a 1000 chapters of something he doesn't like before reviewing it just because of some random rule he saw some other fool make in some random website? And what is that about lifespan that can be recovered in the future just because the MC is reincarnated or transmigrated-whatever? Are you also one of those looser writer that "thinks" that any plot armor is justified to help the MC's wish fulfilment? Or maybe you are a little homeless troll in training? If so you should find your food elsewhere, i already have other trolls to feed.
Janosch_
Janosch_Lv15Janosch_

Of course he can gain additional lifespan, the novel is a frickin cultivation novel

BlackFan:What is the problem in reviewing with just 3 chapters? Don't tell me that you are that kind of fool that reads 200 or even a 1000 chapters of something he doesn't like before reviewing it just because of some random rule he saw some other fool make in some random website? And what is that about lifespan that can be recovered in the future just because the MC is reincarnated or transmigrated-whatever? Are you also one of those looser writer that "thinks" that any plot armor is justified to help the MC's wish fulfilment? Or maybe you are a little homeless troll in training? If so you should find your food elsewhere, i already have other trolls to feed.
TyrantDragonTurtle
TyrantDragonTurtleLv4TyrantDragonTurtle

Martial arts. he Trains martial arts, They have a limit of 100 years (Told to us at the beginning). there are qi cultivators, but as of 40 chapters, it is Impossible for him to cultivate qi (immortality) and live for a long time

Janosch_:Of course he can gain additional lifespan, the novel is a frickin cultivation novel
yayamasthura
yayamasthuraLv12yayamasthura

Great 👍, as reader if u dont like the story then stop reading why forcing ur self to keep reading till the story progress. im reading cause i enjoy, not stressing myself

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GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14GrandVoid

whyd you call them dum tho.

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BlackFan
BlackFanLv5BlackFan

Well that is a relevant and intelligent question, so given the history of this post, i will try to answer it with a minimum of sincerity. If people would just directly question that behaviour of mine instead of confusing it with irrelevant ideas, maybe i would have simply shut up or simply said the truth of the matter. Truth being that i was being a jerk because i was kind of offended or hurt by the idea that the author was marketing about being ok for someone to gamble his life in exchange for a plot armor that was "pre-ordained". That is in my opinion very very poor writing and even more it is a dangerous scam. Note that if the author had been earnest about the situation and if that kind of action was compatible with the MC character and attitude, i would probably be still reading that story. I have little problem with a MC doing dumb things or being a daredevil if that is logical with the story. Not that i wouldn't call him a fool for it, because he is one. And not that i wouldn't respect him in some part, The fact is that in reality those type of stuntman are not donkeys who blindly follow the carrot and who are completely unaware of the consequences of their actions.

GrandVoid:whyd you call them dum tho.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14GrandVoid

True th story isnt the best and not that intelligent. So You where offended by the book?

BlackFan:Well that is a relevant and intelligent question, so given the history of this post, i will try to answer it with a minimum of sincerity. If people would just directly question that behaviour of mine instead of confusing it with irrelevant ideas, maybe i would have simply shut up or simply said the truth of the matter. Truth being that i was being a jerk because i was kind of offended or hurt by the idea that the author was marketing about being ok for someone to gamble his life in exchange for a plot armor that was "pre-ordained". That is in my opinion very very poor writing and even more it is a dangerous scam. Note that if the author had been earnest about the situation and if that kind of action was compatible with the MC character and attitude, i would probably be still reading that story. I have little problem with a MC doing dumb things or being a daredevil if that is logical with the story. Not that i wouldn't call him a fool for it, because he is one. And not that i wouldn't respect him in some part, The fact is that in reality those type of stuntman are not donkeys who blindly follow the carrot and who are completely unaware of the consequences of their actions.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14GrandVoid

ok just reread your post and nevermind that last sentence.

GrandVoid:True th story isnt the best and not that intelligent. So You where offended by the book?
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14GrandVoid

I man im just one of those People that reade everything unless the grammer is worse than the plot.

BlackFan:Well that is a relevant and intelligent question, so given the history of this post, i will try to answer it with a minimum of sincerity. If people would just directly question that behaviour of mine instead of confusing it with irrelevant ideas, maybe i would have simply shut up or simply said the truth of the matter. Truth being that i was being a jerk because i was kind of offended or hurt by the idea that the author was marketing about being ok for someone to gamble his life in exchange for a plot armor that was "pre-ordained". That is in my opinion very very poor writing and even more it is a dangerous scam. Note that if the author had been earnest about the situation and if that kind of action was compatible with the MC character and attitude, i would probably be still reading that story. I have little problem with a MC doing dumb things or being a daredevil if that is logical with the story. Not that i wouldn't call him a fool for it, because he is one. And not that i wouldn't respect him in some part, The fact is that in reality those type of stuntman are not donkeys who blindly follow the carrot and who are completely unaware of the consequences of their actions.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14GrandVoid

Do you have any recomendations? Dont include harem or will. /:

BlackFan:Well that is a relevant and intelligent question, so given the history of this post, i will try to answer it with a minimum of sincerity. If people would just directly question that behaviour of mine instead of confusing it with irrelevant ideas, maybe i would have simply shut up or simply said the truth of the matter. Truth being that i was being a jerk because i was kind of offended or hurt by the idea that the author was marketing about being ok for someone to gamble his life in exchange for a plot armor that was "pre-ordained". That is in my opinion very very poor writing and even more it is a dangerous scam. Note that if the author had been earnest about the situation and if that kind of action was compatible with the MC character and attitude, i would probably be still reading that story. I have little problem with a MC doing dumb things or being a daredevil if that is logical with the story. Not that i wouldn't call him a fool for it, because he is one. And not that i wouldn't respect him in some part, The fact is that in reality those type of stuntman are not donkeys who blindly follow the carrot and who are completely unaware of the consequences of their actions.
BlackFan
BlackFanLv5BlackFan

Unfortunately i don't really have recommendations of my own. I don't even remember the last time i gave a 4 stars rating to a web novel. For me to recommend it would have to be at least 5 stars which is the equivalent of my favourite list. Personally i read web novel mostly because i am a fan of the genre. So it is more of a very personal pastime. I am unhappy that i don't consider most of them minimally well written. Am i being too critical? Maybe. But i do think that the genre is still comparatively young and evolving. I am still hopeful for the future. But who knows when it will be. I hope that in getting better they won't loose their uniqueness (whatever that is) and copy other genres just to be "more standard". That would be truly a sad thing. That is why, i normally mainly critique basic common sense. Since that can easily break the trust between the author and the reader. I don't care much for any "official, superior and perfect quality writing craft" that some random guy and his groupies has invented/ promoted.

GrandVoid:Do you have any recomendations? Dont include harem or will. /:
BlackFan
BlackFanLv5BlackFan

Good stomach.

GrandVoid:I man im just one of those People that reade everything unless the grammer is worse than the plot.
EpithetEnjoyer
EpithetEnjoyerLv1EpithetEnjoyer

Who said you WOULD get it back? You say it like its an expected thing.

Rosefer_Ancot:For me, you are the dumb one who reviewing a novel in just 3 chapters. Imagine if you are reincarnated and you will not used your cheat. Because You are afraid losing a lifespan that can be recovered in the future.Theb who is dumb now??
OnlyTimeIsLost
OnlyTimeIsLostLv15OnlyTimeIsLost

1. sorry if I sounded mean, wasn't trying to but it is hard to convey feeling through text. 2. there is no common sense to be found on the internet 3. I see the chapters on webnovel 2-5 pages on a normal book based on length. so I normally judge a book after 5-10 webnovel chapters. there free and it's not like I have anything better to do

BlackFan
BlackFanLv5BlackFan

Well, as i reread it, my own response was kind of aggressive and your own is mainly just a remark/proposition. Perhaps i was influenced by other things like the earlier comment for example, which is not really an excuse. That is what communication come down to for us lowly mortal.

OnlyTimeIsLost:1. sorry if I sounded mean, wasn't trying to but it is hard to convey feeling through text. 2. there is no common sense to be found on the internet 3. I see the chapters on webnovel 2-5 pages on a normal book based on length. so I normally judge a book after 5-10 webnovel chapters. there free and it's not like I have anything better to do
Koprakos
KoprakosLv4Koprakos

As a person before said, It's dumb to not use your cheat after reincarnation just because you need to sacrifice 20 years of lifespan. It is known that cultivators prolong their life as they reach higher realms. At some point 20 years is no different that a blink of an eye.There is no need for any plot armor to accure. Also in life don't expect to receive unconditionally without giving anything. That's the mindset of little brats.

Mute
MuteLv13Mute

I personally enjoyed this, sure he was reckless with his lifespan, but in this sort of world, giving up 20 years of lifespan for the ability to get strong seems totally worth it, if it was on our planet, i'd agree that it's a bad move, but in a world where strength matters a lot, exchanging 20 years from the end of your life for strength in the remaining part just seems good.

Im19
Im19Lv1Im19

Not being racist but when i knew the MC's name was chinese i instantly gave up reading it cause i know 96% of the time they don't make any sense. So to me him reading 3 chapters is quite generous

OnlyTimeIsLost:The problem with reviewing after only 3 chapters is like reading only the prologe of a book. I mean sure you can quite there but it doesn't represent the full book.